Forum Criticism Team Callsigns

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Name (chat nick) Callsign εїз Crit Strengths Favorite things to review
Honorary Butterflies
mayoculpamayoculpa (mayoculpa) BandCelledSister.jpg Band-Celled Sister Brainstorming, showing newbies the ropes, fleshing out or trimming down concepts Magic, science, horror, wholesomeness, mystery, squick - as long as it's got some strong emotional flavor, I'm likely interested
Junior Staff!
amnestic_protocolamnestic_protocol (amnestic_protocol) DorisLongwing.jpg Doris Longwing aaaaaaaaaaaaa i really, really enjoy antimemetics. I also enjoy infohazards, cognitohazards, things that are in your dreams. And of course, monster skips
ApoplexicApoplexic (Apoplexic) ForestQueen.jpg Crossley's Forest Queen Article focus, extraneous details, internal logical consistency Thing that show the Foundation as an actual entity composed of People with Opinions
[[BananaRepublic]] (Levi) [NOTE: INACTIVE] EasternTigerSwallowtail.jpg Eastern Tiger Swallowtail in-depth critique, plot holes, narrative, awkward wording long articles, heavy narrative, good drafts with large problems, train wreck articles
Countless SkiesCountless Skies (Countless_Skies) WoodWhite.jpg Wood White Clinical tone, characterization, line-by-line crit, mechanical errors, grammar, wording, consistency. Long articles, articles where the SCP format frames a story, trainwreck articles, articles with half-formed ideas, articles with a theme, articles that have drug weirdness, articles that are scary, mindf***s.
DarkStuffDarkStuff (DarkStuff) GardenTiger.JPG Garden Tiger Moth Line-by-lines, characterization, tales, horror (I think), dialogue (I also think). Creator of WWS so will always read those; fairly knowledgeable on Wondertainment. Incomprehensible, nonsensical, abstract horror / concepts in general. I also really like cute and wholesome things. I also have different standards for what is considered a "long" or "short" article (all lengths probably fine).
DrCarollDrCaroll (Caroll) Skipper.jpg Silver-spotted Skipper Imagery, clinical tone, endings/conclusions, grammar Short articles, GoI formats
Gabriel JadeGabriel Jade (GabrielJade) PurpleEmperor.jpg Purple Emperor Series-1 style articles, Format Screws, Clever containment procedures, Interesting anomalies.
JazstarJazstar (Jazstar) [NOTE: INACTIVE] BluePansy.jpg Blue Pansy Grammar, wording, clinical tone, and psychology. Drafts by new writers, SCP articles, anomalous reinterpretations of psychological phenomena and mythology.
MendelssohnMendelssohn (Mendelssohn) [NOTE: RESIGNED] GiantOwl.JPG Giant Owl Humanoids, characterization, evaluating if something can generate the intended emotional response in the reader, clinical tone, pacing, identifying extraneous info, general in-depth critique Character-focused drafts, shorter articles in general
PedantiquePedantique (Pedantique) SummerAzure.jpg Summer Azure Line-by-line crit, conceptual/narrative review. General weirdness, medium to long in length.
PoecilotheriaPoecilotheria (Poecilotheria) Viceroy.jpg Viceroy Butterfly clinical tone, line-by-line, scientific terminology, logical consistency, brainstorming and expanding on ideas, and containment procedures ideas that need expanded on, complex or unusual containment procedures, anything medical, articles with severe grammatical or formatting issues, and stuff by people new to the site
PolynomPolynom HollyBlue.jpg Holly Blue awkward wording, grammar, and formatting mistakes; more line-by-lines than concept stuff prefer reviewing drafts from newer members, don't really have preference on length or general concept
ratsyratsy (ratsy) OrangeOakleaf.jpg Orange Oakleaf Line by line, grammar, mechanics, logic. Tales, humanoids, all things quirky or cute.
RimpleRimple (Rimple) Comma.jpg Comma Theme, emotionality, character and dialogue. "Clinical tone". Helping newbies find direction & meaning in drafts. WEIRD SHIT
sirpuddingsirpudding (sirpudding) SnowberryClearwing2.JPG Snowberry Clearwing
The Great HippoThe Great Hippo Glasswing.jpg Glasswing Butterfly
Uncle NicoliniUncle Nicolini (unclenicolini) Buckeye.jpg Common Buckeye specialize in newbie articles, poor clinical tone, trainwreck drafts, and nice formatting. I have extensive knowledge of WWS, Wondertainment, and I don't shy from GoI formats and Tales. prefer the 'whimsical oddity' kind of anomalies
VeiedhimaedhrVeiedhimaedhr (Veiedhimaedhr, Galaxy_Class) SylphinaAngel.jpg Sylphina Angel Obsessive Line by Line feedback, clinical tone, narratives, extraneous information trimming, awkward wording, concept checking, narrative structuring, checking the believability of bureaucratic bickering within the Foundation SCP articles, train-wreck articles, short-medium length articles, newbie articles which have conceptual potential but need to be quickly and brutally attuned to site standards, articles that try to evoke non-horrifying emotions, non-interstellar SCP articles, articles with rich characterization.
Butterflies promoted to OS or Mod while on Forum Crit are here!
Captain KirbyCaptain Kirby (CaptainKirby) QuestionMark.jpg Question Mark Narratives, execution, computer science stuff and sentence flow/wording Short-medium length articles, articles that use a simple concept in a surprising way, and exploration logs
DrMagnusDrMagnus (DrMagnus) RedAdmiral.jpg Red Admiral Clinical Tone, Computer Science, Phrasing, Foundation Lore Anything involving Computers, CotBG, "Old School" articles
LadyKatieLadyKatie (LadyKatie) CairnsBirdwing.jpg Cairns Birdwing Tales, mechanics, grammar
LeveritasLeveritas (Leveritas) CrimsonSpottedForester.jpg Crimson Spotted Forester Line-by-line and concept, Clinical tone, humanoids, ideas for backstory, reasonable Containment Procedures. Ideas that are beautifully simple in their execution.
Modern_ErasmusModern_Erasmus (Modern_Erasmus) BlueMorpho.jpg Blue Morpho Identifying superfluous info, narrative devolpment advice, grammar Anything related to history, mythology, or exploration
Sly161Sly161 (Sly161) PaintedLady.jpg Painted Lady Grammar/mechanics, knowing if an idea will work, Foundation lore. perfers short-medium length drafts, weird creatures/enviroments.
taylor_itkintaylor_itkin (taylor_itkin, taylor_critkin, taylor, etc.) TailedJay.jpg Tailed Jay Line-by-line, narrative, dialogue, character development, and brainstorming Shorter drafts, new-writer drafts, SCP articles, anything with "new" ideas
trettertretter (tretter, trots, trets) NeglectedEightyEight.JPG Neglected Eighty-Eight Concepts, narratives, logical consistency, sentence flow, artillery crit Train wreck drafts, drafts from people who don't know how to write at all/don't know the community or its expectations
Zachary MaxwellZachary Maxwell (ZacharyMaxwell) Peacock.jpg Peacock Butterfly Line-by-line crit with additional honest focus on concept/narrative (or lack thereof) Drafts that are somewhat sinking but can be saved; medium to long drafts; drafts from people new to the site and new to the concept.


Other staff!

NAME Chat Nick Callsign Image
A Random DayA Random Day ARD Mighty Monarch Monarch
Jacob ConwellJacob Conwell Conwell Oregon Swallowtail OregonSwallowtail.jpeg
Lazar LyusternikLazar Lyusternik Lazar Common Mormon CommonMormon.jpg
TaffetaTaffeta Taffeta Ulysses Swallowtail UlyssesSwallowtail.jpg
Tuomey TombstoneTuomey Tombstone Tuomey Emerald Swallowtail EmeraldSwallowtail.jpg
ZynZyn Zyn Queen Alexandra’s Birdwing Alexandra.jpg