A Present for Sylvia345

Hey there! Happy holidays! You asked for help with the draft in your sandbox, Giant Carnivorous Arachnid. I'm going to do what I can to write out good crit for it now, without being able to talk to you, but from Christmas onward I'll be available through wikidot PM or on the IRC chat to talk to you about this piece and help you figure out a story and shape for it. I'm committing here to help you get this draft to a site-worthy state..

I don't know if you've ever seen crit on this site before, or if you read the guidelines, but the standard operating procedure is to be harsh, have high standards, and encourage everyone to do their best and continue improving. I won't be a dick, but I won't shy away from talking about issues in this draft. None of it is at all personal, so please don't take any criticisms too hard.

I'm gonna move ahead to crit, so check out the next tab.

Again, Happy holidays. Enjoy!

- Secret Santa